Wednesday, December 28, 2011

~Yet Another Inner Conflict


 Perturbing Mentations. . .


sitting in my room, hearing the clock,
each passing moment, tick tock tick tock...
random thoughts come and go,
ohh, the slight frown on my brow...

the room is locked, there is no key,
enjoying the song -kolaveri Di...
for it's rhythm, but more for the sense,
it sure does convey my life's essence... 
the helpless feeling, the loss of meaning,
hardly- working, but lots of dreaming...

close your eyes, and open thy heart,
for once admire, the Majesty's Art...
as He demands, so we should,
cherish our lives in brotherhood...
endless arguments, useless fight,
why a constant struggle for Might ?

let's be friends, let us show,
love is greater than one's Ego...
enjoy the winter, but clear the fog,
don't keep your thoughts in back-log,
pour your heart, don't be shy,
express what you feel, as did I...
Posted by TARUN JOSHI

26 comments:

  1. SanjhlaDecember 28, 2011 at 6:41 PM

    Nyc... :)

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  2. TARUN JOSHIDecember 28, 2011 at 6:47 PM

    thanks Sanjhla.. :)

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  3. AnonymousDecember 28, 2011 at 6:53 PM

    awsum hai dude.....i lyk it:)

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  4. TARUN JOSHIDecember 28, 2011 at 6:55 PM

    thanks.. :)

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  5. shibani sanwalDecember 29, 2011 at 12:33 PM

    very nice..

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  6. AnonymousDecember 31, 2011 at 3:17 PM

    gud :)

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  7. SiddyDecember 31, 2011 at 6:32 PM

    I like it Yeah.. :-)
    Why this Kolaveri Kolaveri Kolaveri Di :-D

    Good luck

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  8. TARUN JOSHIJanuary 1, 2012 at 12:13 AM

    thanks Shivani, Anonymous, and Siddy for your appreciation.. :)glad that u like my work... keep visiting..

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  9. AnonymousJanuary 1, 2012 at 9:43 PM

    wow yaar, too good; Awesome.. :)

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  10. TARUN JOSHIJanuary 2, 2012 at 1:03 PM

    thanks :)

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  11. AdityaJanuary 3, 2012 at 10:05 PM

    nyc yaar... enjoyn the song kolaveri di ;-)

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  12. Sanchita MehtaJanuary 3, 2012 at 10:41 PM

    I like it, its nice :) A job well done :)

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  13. AnonymousJanuary 3, 2012 at 10:46 PM

    super awesome!! :)

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  14. TARUN JOSHIJanuary 4, 2012 at 12:44 PM

    thanks Aditya and Anonymous.. :)
    Sanchita: you are far better; keep reading the last lines till you start writing.. :P

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  15. AnonymousJanuary 8, 2012 at 11:40 PM

    superb ya....awesome creation...:)

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  16. AnonymousJanuary 9, 2012 at 9:36 PM

    Bhai Mast hai. mixed emotions ko kaafi acche se dhaala hai. rhyming is good.
    -Anurag

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  17. TARUN JOSHIJanuary 9, 2012 at 10:27 PM

    thank you anonymous and Anurag... :)

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  18. AnonymousJanuary 23, 2012 at 11:20 PM

    oho......... kya baaat hai? waaah waah waaah!!!

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  19. AnonymousJanuary 23, 2012 at 11:21 PM

    the above comment was made by Manas

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  20. TARUN JOSHIJanuary 24, 2012 at 4:48 PM

    thanks Manas.. :)

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  21. Sachi SharmaJanuary 25, 2012 at 1:24 AM

    Simply loved it to the core..... *Applauds Applauds*...... way to go Tarun :)...Sachi

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  22. TARUN JOSHIJanuary 25, 2012 at 9:45 PM

    thanks a lot Sachi.. :)

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  23. DhanandJitMarch 8, 2012 at 6:14 PM

    endless arguments, useless fight,
    why a constant struggle for Might?

    Best line Tarun. Keep it up :)

    http://dhan-moviemania.blogspot.com/

    http://www.travelstoriesandmore.blogspot.com/

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  24. Monii...April 9, 2012 at 12:26 AM

    "ohh, the slight frown on my brow"
    Interesting mix of thoughts and choice of words...good work :)

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  25. UnknownOctober 4, 2012 at 11:30 AM

    ahh....! nice.. som1 specialy askd me to read ur blog... i think its worth it...

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    1. TARUN JOSHIOctober 24, 2012 at 10:03 PM

      thanks...glad you liked it...may i know who suggested it to you.?

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